I like how you tried to make this very FBF. It bothers me a little that they eyes arent animated when the rest of the body is. The joke isnt very original, but still a fairly good one, and you came up with a pretty good way of delivering it. But the song choice for link smashing the pots at the end could've been better, it didnt fit the "slow" pace he was throwing the pots, and keep in mind not evenone on this site/the internet will like listening to metal, even if it's for a small amount of time. Keep practising though, I see a lot of potential here :D
I'm not sure if this was meant to be funny, because it wasn't really. It may have helped with some audio, becuase then you con deliver your lines in a humourous way. I'm also not a fan of tweeny animations so thats why you have a really low score. Keep at it though :)
Thanks. It was an experiment :)
I will keep getting better
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